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제목 | Is there a gym in your company? | 등록일 | 2015-10-07 |
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내용 | Of course, there is a gym in my company. Many employees use that gym in the morning before the work, in the lunch time, and in the evening after the work. But I don't use that place. It is a little bit inconvenient to exercise with acquaintances. My company support a welfare program that name is well-being club. There are many gyms in many areas belong to well-bing club. Employees using tha program pay using fees to company, then people can select the gym near there house or in a convenient place. |
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담당강사 | Madie | 등록일 | 2015-10-07 |
첨삭 내용 | Of course, there is a gym in my company. Many employees use that gym in the morning before they work, during lunch time, and in the evening after work. But I don't use that place. It is a little bit inconvenient to exercise with acquaintances. My company support a welfare program that name is well-being club. There are many gyms in many areas that belongs to well-being club. Employees using the program pay using fees to company, then people can select the gym near there house or in a convenient place.
In your script there were only a few corrections.Its about proper use of prepositions.Nevertheless your script is good and ideas are very consistent. |