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제목 Cooking 등록일 2015-10-07
내용 I'll tell you about my favorite cooking.

My favorite cooking is to make noodle foods such as ramen, spaghetti, and mixed noodle with hot source which is called bibim guksu in korea.

The reason why I like it, The cuisine is very simple and noodle foods are so delicious.
Also my wife and children love what I cook.

From now, I will explain the cooking to make spaghetti.

First, prepare a tomato sauce. I usually buy it.
Second, Pour water into the pot and boil it.
When the water is boiling, put spaghetti noodles into the pot and wait for about 8 minutes.
Third, mix noodles with tomato sauce.

Finally, enjoy spaghetti

That's the end of my story.
담당강사 Ned1 등록일 2015-10-07
첨삭 내용

I'll tell you about my favorite menu. My favorite menu is to make noodle foods such as ramen, spaghetti, and mixed noodle with hot source which is called bibim guksu in Korea. The reason why I like it, because the cuisine is very simple and noodle foods are so delicious. Also my wife and children love what I cook. From now, I will explain the procedure on how to make spaghetti. First, prepare a tomato sauce. I usually buy it. Second, Pour water into the pot and boil it. When the water is boiling, put spaghetti noodles into the pot and wait for about 8 minutes. Third, mix noodles with tomato sauce. Finally, enjoy the spaghetti. That's the end of my story.

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