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제목 | when do you start a swimming? | 등록일 | 2015-10-05 |
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내용 | I started a swimming 3 years ago but last year I began to swimming in earnest and This may I got a life guard license And I got a cpr , first aid license, as expert level As I said you i go to swimming pool every weekend To practics a rescue swimming and exercise. And last month I particifated in a swimming compettion in Daegu It was very awesome experience to me and i will improve My swimming skills |
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담당강사 | Madie | 등록일 | 2015-10-05 |
첨삭 내용 | I started swimming 3 years ago but last year I began to swimming more seriously .Its becauseI I got a life guard license, a cpr , and first aid license as expert level As I said I go to swimming pool every weekend to practice in rescue swimming and exercise. And last month I participated in a swimming compettion in Daegu. It was very awesome experience for me and I promise to improve my swimming skills
Please be guided with the corrections that i noted in your script,thank you! Teacher Madie |