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제목 when do you start a swimming? 등록일 2015-10-05
내용 I started a swimming 3 years ago
but last year I began to swimming in earnest
and This may I got a life guard license
And I got a cpr , first aid license, as expert level
As I said you i go to swimming pool every weekend
To practics a rescue swimming and exercise.
And last month I particifated in a swimming compettion in Daegu
It was very awesome experience to me and i will improve My swimming skills
담당강사 Madie 등록일 2015-10-05
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I started  swimming 3 years ago but last year I began to swimming more seriously .Its becauseI I got a life guard license,  a cpr , and first aid license as expert level As I said  I go to swimming pool every weekend to practice in rescue swimming and exercise. And last month I participated in a swimming compettion in Daegu. It was very awesome experience for me and I promise to improve my swimming skills

 

Please be guided with the corrections that i noted in your script,thank you!

Teacher Madie

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