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제목 self introduction 등록일 2015-10-01
내용 Hello. I`m happy to introduce myself to you.
My name is Suehee Huh and Ive marriged 6 years ago.
There are 3 members in my family. a kind Husband, cute son, and me.
I`ve worked at Institute for Basic Science in Deajeon and my husband`s company is in other city far from here, so we are commuter couple. So I take care of my son on weekdays alone and I`m trying to hang out with them for the weekend. when i was young, I wanted to become a scientist. so I studied biology in the university and received a Ph.D. degree in neuroscience. and i`m still working on neuroscien part. Of course, it`s not easy to keep the balance between work and family. But, I think I`m a really lucky man because my family is happy and I`m working what I want.
담당강사 Eliza 등록일 2015-10-02
첨삭 내용

Hello. I`m happy to introduce myself to you. My name is Suehee Huh and I have been married for about 6 years. There are 3 members in my family, a kind husband, a cute son, and me. I'm working at Institute for Basic Science in Deajeon and my husband`s company is in another cityand it is quite far from here, so we are commuter couples. So I take care of my son on weekdays alone and I`m trying to hang out with them on weekends. When I was young, I wanted to become a scientist. so I studied biology in the university and received a Ph.D. degree in neuroscience and I`m still working in neuroscience part. Of course, it`s not easy to keep the balance between work and family. But, I think I`m a lucky woman because I have a happy family and I realy like what I am doing in my job.

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