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제목 | My job. | 등록일 | 2015-09-30 |
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내용 | Hi. How are you? I fully enjoyed long weekend and had a enough rest. I am going to explain my job today. I guess that you might miss my explanation due to my wrong pronunciation. I have been working for my company since 2000. My company is Hanwha Advanced Materials and it is one of the Hanwha Group. The Hanwha Griup is one of the largest conglomerate in Korea. My company manufactures advanced material like as automotive plastic parts and electrics parts. And it has six subsidiaries worldwide such as USA, China, Europe. And I am in charge of managing those subsidaries in various way. I report sales and profit statement to top mmanagement instead of that subsidiarues. And I deliver orders of management to them. I sometimes go there on business trip to report their details. So I must improve my English speech to communicate with them efficiently. |
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담당강사 | Douglas2 | 등록일 | 2015-09-30 |
첨삭 내용 | Hi. How are you? I fully enjoyed a long weekend and had enough rest. I am going to explain my job today. I guess that you might have missed my explanation due to my wrong pronunciation. I have been working for my company since 2000. My company is Hanwha Advanced Materials and it is part of the Hanwha Group. The Hanwha Group is one of the largest conglomerates in Korea. My company manufactures advanced materials such as automotive plastic parts and electronic parts. And it has six subsidiaries worldwide such as USA, China, and Europe. I am in charge of managing those subsidaries in various ways. I report sales and profit statements to top management instead of the subsidiaries. I deliver the orders of management to them. I sometimes go there on business trips to report the details. So I must improve my English to communicate with them effectively. |