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제목 | I live with parents | 등록일 | 2014-04-16 |
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내용 | I agree that I live with parents for the following reasons The first reason is I can save money because I don't need to pay expense of house, food, utilitys and also I can reduce waste of time such as cooking, washing clothes. The second reason is I can have a lot of refresh time because I divide the housework, so I will have more free time to enjoy my life next reason is I can get emotional stability when i am sick, i can get help from parent quickly The final reason is I can get some exprience and a lot of information from them, so i can share with knowlege all family and we can more communicate with them each other |
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담당강사 | Riza | 등록일 | 2014-04-16 |
첨삭 내용 | I agree that I live with parents for the following reasons >> I want to live with my parents for the following reasons:
The first reason is I can save money because I don't need to pay expense of house, food, utilitys and also I can reduce waste of time such as cooking, washing clothes. >> First reason, I can save money because I don't need to pay for house, food and utility services, I can also save time by not cooking and not washing clothes. The second reason is I can have a lot of refresh time because I divide the housework, so I will have more free time to enjoy my life next reason is I can get emotional stability when i am sick, i can get help from parent quickly >> Second reason is I can have a lot of relaxing time because I divide the housework, I also have a lot of free time. Next reason is I can easily get help and emotional stability when I am sick from my parents. The final reason is I can get some exprience and a lot of information from them, so i can share with knowlege all family and we can more communicate with them each other >> the final reason is, I can get more experience and more information from them whick I can share it with my family. and lastly we can communicate with each other. |