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제목 Thinking of my career path (2/2) 등록일 2015-09-28
내용 I’m not sure if it is worthy of spending over two years and over U$10,000 to get a master degree in accounting or accounting certificates. Let’s think of it and make an objective judgment if business schools ask prospective Ph.D. students to have master degree in accounting or accounting certificates.

One thing I’m looking for is what I can contribute with myh best. I’m working mining business. Does it mean I can the best performance in mining area? Accounting is pretty new area for me. Is it worthy for me to spend over 7 years to be a professional in accounting? Let’s think about that more with enough time. Try to clarify what the problems and concerns that I have are and what the causes of the problems are step by step. It’ll be important for me to check up my status correctly with that information. Don’t give up and pursue to find efficient and effective solutions and clear ideas regarding my career path with positive mind, hope, and happiness.
담당강사 JoeM1 등록일 2015-09-29
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I’m not sure if it is worth worthy of spending over two years and over U$10,000 to get a master degree in accounting or accounting certificates. Let’s think about of it and make an objective judgment if business schools ask prospective Ph.D. students to have a master degree in accounting or accounting certificates. One thing I’m looking for is what I can contribute with myh best. I’m working in the mining business. Does it mean I can the best performance in the mining area? Accounting is a pretty new area for me. Is it worthy worth it for me to spend over 7 years to be a professional in accounting? Let’s think about that more with enough more time. Try to clarify what the problems and concerns that I have are and what the causes of the problems are step by step. It’ll be important for me to check up on my status correctly with that information. Don’t give up and pursue try to find efficient and effective solutions and clear ideas regarding my career path with a positive  mind, with hope, and with continued happiness.

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