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제목 | I am very energitic person | 등록일 | 2015-09-22 |
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내용 | Last class I attended a important meeting. So I didnt attend my class. So I prepare to study today's class . Theseday I am very busy because korean traditional holiday "chooseok"is comming. So I have to visit my clients and give the present. But I have exercised swimming because I want to be a lifeguard. |
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담당강사 | Paula | 등록일 | 2015-09-23 |
첨삭 내용 | Last class I attended a important meeting. -> Last class, I attended an important meeting.
So I prepare to study today's class. -> I studied the lesson for this class. Theseday I am very busy because korean traditional holiday "chooseok"is comming. -> I'm very busy these days because korean traditional holiday "chooseok"is comming.
But I have exercised swimming because I want to be a lifeguard. -> I also practiced swimming because I want to be a lifeguard.
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