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제목 Please check my sentences grammatically(9.4) 등록일 2015-09-04
내용 I feel disgusting when I watch some people that dry their dirty point like ass hole by using hair dryer.
I think that eating slowly is a good habit.
In my case, I eat slowly because my father made me do it when I was a kid.
It is good for my health, but sometimes I feel uncomfortable especially when I eat with other people.
Although they finish eating, but i still eat because I eat slowly.

I feel disgusting when I watch some people that say something while filling with foods in mouth.
담당강사 Christine1 등록일 2015-09-06
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I feel disgust when I see someone drying his or her dirty hair with a hair dryer in public. I beieve that eating slowly is a good habit. I eat slowly because my father made me do it when I was a kid. I believe that eating sowly is good for my health, but sometimes I feel uncomfortable when I eat with other people. Although they finish eating before me, I still  continue to eat  slowly becuase it's my regular habit. Sometimes I feel  sicken when I see some people  eat and talk with food in their mouth.

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