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제목 Hello! Glad to meet you! 등록일 2015-09-01
내용 Hi! I'm Helen. Glad to meet you!
On this Wendsday night,there is an appointment with my colleagues for going to the play.
therefore it's the first class, i have to delay the class, i'm sorry.
I will delay our first class to next time.

see ya!
담당강사 Candice2 등록일 2015-09-02
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Correction:

Hi! I'm Helen. Glad to meet you! 

This Wednesday night, I have an appointment with my colleagues to go to a play.

Sorry I have to delay our first class together.

We will delay our first class to next time.

See ya (you)!

HI HELEN! MY NAME IS CANDICE. IT WAS NICE MEETING YOU AS WELL. ALSO, I AM TOTALLY FINE WITH HAVING OUR FIRST CLASS DELAYED TO NEXT TIME, SO HOPE YOU HAVE A GREAT TIME WITH YOUR COLLEAGUES! I'LL SEE YOU FRIDAY THEN! BYE! 

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