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제목 Hello, Wilma~~ 등록일 2015-08-25
내용 Hello, Teacher~~ ^^;
This is Hoon.

I think It is first time to write something here.

I realize that I need study more than now.
ans writing is good way to study.

So, I decide to write some stuff~~ ^^
But, you know, because I am busy as usal for my work, I can not write everyday.

If you help me, I will learn more.

Thank you~~ See you~~
담당강사 Wilma 등록일 2015-08-25
첨삭 내용

Hello, Teacher~~ ^^; This is Hoon. I think It is my first time to write something here. I realized that I need to study more than now and writing is a good way to study. So, I have decided  to write some stuff~~ ^^ But, you know, because I am busy as usual for my at work, I cannot write everyday. If you help me, I will learn more. Thank you~~ See you~~

 

Hi Hoon!

It is my pleasure to help you when it comes to writing. I advice you to write something about your daily routine or schedule. It will serve as your diary page and I will try to correct your mistakes. Good luck ^__^

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