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| 제목 | celebration, gathering, festive, invitation | 등록일 | 2015-08-19 |
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| 내용 | 1. celebration - My family members will gather together this Sunday to hold a celebration for my mother's birthday. 2. gathering - My friend and I used to meet together at a gathering for each birthday party. 3. festive - This Sunday will be a festive day due to a birthday party. 4. invitation - My birthday is in the middle of winter so I couldn't give invitation cards to friends when I was little though. |
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| 담당강사 | Cort1 | 등록일 | 2015-08-20 |
| 첨삭 내용 | 1. celebration - My family members will gather together this Sunday to hold a celebration for my mother's birthday. 2. gathering - My friend and I used to meet together at a gathering for each birthday party. 3. festive - This Sunday will be a festive day due to a birthday party. 4. invitation - My birthday is in the middle of winter so I couldn't give invitation cards to friends when I was little.
Emma, Good work on these. The only suggestion I have is to cut the word "though" from the end of the 4th sentence. Best, |
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