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제목 Long time no write. 등록일 2015-08-18
내용 Long time no write. I checked my page now and also see your correction last month.
Thank you for your correction and also for teaching me well even I don't study harder. I always said like "I'm tired", "I'm busy"... I'm so sorry about that. And also I'm always thinking you are the best teacher for me.

Maybe I'll be busy until October because of the exam. Please forgive me about not studying hard.

Thank you and have a good day.
담당강사 Angela1 등록일 2015-08-18
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Hello Tim!

Your message made my day. It's nice to hear from you. Thanks for the compliment. You've been my student for a long time and I'm glad you are one. It's a pleasure of mine to teach you somehow. I just hope that you are learning .Anyway, just continue on improving although you are busy.  I desire that you will do well in your exam. You can do it !  Put a lot of effort into it :) And, you don't have to say "sorry" since being busy is a part of life. You just have to be good in time management. Perhaps, Learning is a life time process so I hope you won't get tired of it :) 

Anyway, I have some corrections for you below.

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Long time no write. - It's been a ling time that I haven't written anything on this page.

I checked my page now and also see your correction last month. - I just recently checked my page and saw your correction for last month.

Thank you for your correction and also for teaching me well even I don't study harder . - Thank you for  giving me daily correction and also for teaching me well even I don't study hard.

I always said like "I'm tired", "I'm busy"...  I'm so sorry about that.  -  I'm so sorry if I keep on saying " I'm tired and busy".

And also I'm always thinking you are the best teacher for me.  -In addition to that, I'm always thinking that you are the best teacher.

( Really ?  hahaha ) 

Maybe I'll be busy until October because of the exam. - Maybe, I'll be busy until October because of the exam.

Please forgive me about not studying hard. Thank you and have a good day. (Good! ) 

 

 

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