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| 제목 | I cannot play basketball. | 등록일 | 2015-08-04 |
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| 내용 | I cannot play basketball, because my co-workers have not played basketball. I don't understand them. They have played Soccerr and Jokgu(Korea treditional sports) almost everyday. Sometime, I want to play basketball very much, but I cannot play it. I'm so sad. So, I found other players who are other company workers. I said them, "whenever i can play basketball. if you want to play it, Just call me." But, they have not called me until now. I beleve that they find me to play basketball. |
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| 담당강사 | Madie | 등록일 | 2015-08-05 |
| 첨삭 내용 | I cannot play basketball because my co-workers do not play basketball. I don't understand them. They play Soccerr and Jokgu(Korea traditional sports) almost everyday. Sometimes I want to play basketball so much, but I cannot . I'm so sad. So, I found other players who are workers from other company . I said them, "whenever you want to play basketball, just call me." But they have not called me until now. I think that they were trying to find me to play basketball.
Thank you for giving extra timr to do a script. Please be guided with the above corrections. T. MAdie |
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