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제목 | What the most important value is in life? | 등록일 | 2015-08-02 |
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내용 | I believe thankfulness is the most important value in life. Thank enables us to do something good and in a right way. Although we have troubles and agonies, we can change things good if we thank to the situation. For example, I didn’t get a Ph.D. because I failed to receive a financial support from school. However, I didn’t frustrate about the situation and thank to the time I studied and researched in the school. Fortunately, I could find job opportunity to work in POSCO. Also, thank allows us to keep so positive that we can move forward. Positive energy make us to be active, as a result, we make meaningful achievements and productive accomplishments. For instance, my team at work was disappeared after company reorganization. I was confused for the first time what is going on in my work. However, I kept thanks I have something to work and colleagues to always support me. I did my best at work whatever my position is. As a result, I won a prize and got promoted. |
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담당강사 | JoeM1 | 등록일 | 2015-08-03 |
첨삭 내용 | I believe thankfulness is the most important value in life. Thankfulness enables us to do |