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제목 | last saturday at night | 등록일 | 2015-07-20 |
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내용 | i went to wedding ceremeney in ma um with my firend`s daughter the bride and groom were wearing black evening dress so she looked really glamaours but i never have been seen bluck evening wedding dress anyway she was very lovey and attractive |
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담당강사 | Verna | 등록일 | 2015-07-21 |
첨삭 내용 | i went to wedding ceremeney in ma um with my firend`s daughter the bride and groom were wearing black evening dress so she looked really glamaours but i never have been seen bluck evening wedding dress anyway she was very lovey and attractive I went to a wedding ceremony in Ma um with my friend`s daughter. The bride and the groom were wearing black evening dress and the bride looked really glamorous. I have never seen black evening dress in a wedding but she was very lovely and attractive.
Study the nouns or pronouns that you need to change into big letter like I. Start your sentences in big letter or capital letters, also the name of place( Maum ), it should be written into big letter. don`t forget the articles like "a". Study the coordinating conjuction `and` and `but`. check the spelling of words |