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제목 | Introduce of my house | 등록일 | 2015-07-14 |
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내용 | I live in a row house with my wife. I have lived together since I got married last year. My house is very small. So there has no balcony. And living room is so narrow. My house has two rooms. One is using as bed room. Another is using as dressing and study room. Even though my house is small, I don't feel inconvenience during everyday life. Because there has everything I need. In bed room, there are TV, air conditioner, bed and multipurpose table. In another room, there are furniture for keeping clothes, PC, and dressing table. If we have baby in the future, I'm planning to move more big house. |
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담당강사 | Jerry | 등록일 | 2015-07-16 |
첨삭 내용 | I live in a row (tiny) house with my wife. I have lived (We have been living) together since (we) got married last year. My house is very small, so there has no (it doesn't have a) balcony. And (The) living room is so narrow. My house has two rooms. One is using as (used as a) bed room and the other is using (used) as dressing and study room. Even though my house is small, I don't feel inconvenience during (on our) everyday life, because there (it) has everything I need. In (the) bed room, there are TV, air conditioner, bed and a multipurpose table. In another room, there are furniture for keeping clothes, PC, and dressing table. If we (would) have a baby in the future, I'm planning (we would have) to move to more (a much bigger) big house. |