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제목 Please check my sentences grammatically (7.10) 등록일 2015-07-12
내용 I got a mission that I have to make employees stop smoking.
The universary that I attended is located in seoul.
There is a lake in universary.
So I usally walk along the lake when I got stressed out like exam term or homework.

I had to run when I go to class if the class room between first and second was too far.
Because of the lake, I can introduce my school to friends very confidently.

Compared to America universary, I'm not sure that Korea universary is large.
There were not campus buses.

Many korean students decide to which college attend because of SAT scores.
I tried to study one more year, to attend the college that I wanted to attend.

There was a memorable professor who I still remember.
He always checked whether students reviewed previous class.
At first he questioned about previous class to student.
If students didn't answer exactly, he blamed them.
I think he loved his student and always considered them.
담당강사 Katharine1 등록일 2015-07-14
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I got assigned a mission that I have to make employees stop smoking. The university that I attended is located in seoul. There is a lake in the universary campus. So I usally walked along the lake when I got stressed out like exam terms or homework. I had to run when I go went to class if the class room between first and second was too far. Because of the lake, I can introduce my school to friends very confidently. Compared to American universaryities, I'm not sure that Korea universary is large. There were not campus buses. Many korean students decide to which college attend because of SAT scores. I tried to study one more year, to attend the college that I wanted to attend. There was a memorable professor who I still remember. He always checked whether students reviewed after the previous class. At first he questioned asked questions about the previous class to the student(s). If students didn't answer exactly correctly, he blamed them. I think he loved his students and always considered them.

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