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제목 | Please check my sentences grammatically (7.8) | 등록일 | 2015-07-12 |
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내용 | I think you watched the stuff that I made sentences on the site. I'm afraid that I'm gonna be burn out because of too much work. If I was too tired, I couldn't know whether the milk went bad. It would upset my stomach. If I have kids, I don't allow them to approach close to balcony. When you cook using oven, you might burn if you don't watch out. I think there are many accidents because of careless. In bathroom, you have to be careful, you don't slide there. The floor is usally wet with water, soap and so on. If you slide there, it might break your bones. I haven't got any accident in the garden. I was scared that the elevator stoped while going to upstairs. I imagined if the elevator fell down. |
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담당강사 | Katharine1 | 등록일 | 2015-07-14 |
첨삭 내용 | I think you |