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제목 From the bed to walking out of the house. 등록일 2015-07-08
내용 Title : From the bed to walking out of the house.

My phone rings at 5:10 AM. I stretch my arm to the phone, and snooze it for 10 minutes.
After 10 minutes, when the phone rings again, I snooze it again.
After two or three times of wrestling with the phone, I elect my body hardly from the bed.
I don't have a shower in the morning, because I did it last night.
Instead, I just wash my hair in no time, and shave with the electric shaver.
After shaving, I adjust a lotion on the face before drying the hair with the dryer.
Because I think that the sooner I adjust the lotion, the better the skin preserve the water balance.
After that, I make the hair with a hair wax. Finally I spray the hair with a hairspray to fix it.
All of the process is done for 15 minutes just in an underwear every morning.
담당강사 Joselin1 등록일 2015-07-10
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Title : From the bed to walking out of the house. My phone rings at 5:10 AM. I stretch my arm to the phone, and snooze it for 10 minutes. After 10 minutes, when the phone rings again, I snooze it again. After two or three times of wrestling with the phone, I elect my body hardly from the bed. I don't have a shower in the morning, because I did it last night. Instead, I just wash my hair in no time, and shave with the electric shaver. After shaving, I adjust a lotion on the face before drying the hair with the dryer. Because I think that the sooner I adjust the lotion, the better the skin preserve the water balance. After that, I make the hair with a hair wax. Finally I spray the hair with a hairspray to fix it. All of the process is done for 15 minutes just in an underwear every morning.

TITLE: From Waking to Walking Out of the House.

The alarm on my phone goes off at 5:10 am. I reach for the phone and press snooze for 10 minutes. When it goes off, I press snooze again. After two or three times of this, I reluctantly get up. I don't shower in the morning because I did it last night. Instead, I just wash my hair quickly and shave with my electric shaver. After shaving, I put lotion on my face before I dry my hair. I figure the lotion will have time to sink in and will preserve the water balance. Afterwards, I put wax in my hair. Finally, I use hair spray to finish it. All of this is done in 15 minutes every morning in my underwear.

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