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제목 Please check my sentences grammatically (7.7 (2)) 등록일 2015-07-07
내용 I can be available, I can go straigt full time!
I think all people is similar to me about quitting jobs when they get much money.
If I have a good skill although I fail to get promotion, I can go everywhere.

You have to choose one. If you choose Work, you have to give up your life like hobby or spending time with family. Or, choose the other one, you give up work like much salary and getting promotion.

My major goal before retire, I want to save my money, and get experiences.
You know, I want to do own my job in the future, at that time I need much money and experiences.
I think my life as a salary man is the practice to do own my job.

I haven't decide yet what to do after retire.
I want to be a instructor who educates company people.

When I improve my skill as a instructor, I want to instruct to global like Google, MS.

Before I got a job, I thought I would quit my job when I would get many things from company.

When I retire,I will be freer than when in company.
담당강사 Katharine1 등록일 2015-07-08
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I can be am available, I can go straight through the/for the full time! I think all people is are similar to me about quitting jobs when they get much a lot of money. If I have a good skill although I fail to get a promotion, I can go everywhere. You have to choose one. If you choose Work, you have to give up your life like hobbies or spending time with your family. Or, choose the other one, you give up work like much salary and getting promotion. My major goal before retire is that I want to save my money, and gain experiences. You know, I want to do own my job in the future, at that time I need much a lot of money and experiences. I think my life as a salary man is the practice for doing own my job. I haven't decided yet what to do after retirement. I want to be a instructor who educates company people. When I improve my skill as an instructor, I want to instruct to global workers like Google, MS employees. Before I got a job, I thought I would quit my job when I would get got many things from my company. When I retire,I will be freer than when I was in my company.

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