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제목 | Please check my sentences grammatically (7.7 (1)) | 등록일 | 2015-07-07 |
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내용 | I worked out at the gym in the night. Sometimes I feel burden when I go to work. It is stressful but I think if I want to improve myself, I have to get burden. In korea, there is a limition retirement. That is "60 years old". On these days there are not many people who retire when they are 60 years old. In my case, maybe I will retire 40, 50years old. Unfortunately, human life is longer than before, almost 100 years old! That's why 50 years old means, that is just half of my all life. I would already retire. That is awful! I will quit my job at least 35 years old. I want to do own my job. If I retire, I want not to be worried about money. I don't any plan to go other company. Some days, I want to do other work for my career. It is important to get a variety experiences. I think Korea is not common sense. There are so many secret accident like getting bribe. Korea look like a good nation for only rich. I have to overcome Racism in America. |
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담당강사 | Katharine1 | 등록일 | 2015-07-08 |
첨삭 내용 | I worked out at the gym |