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제목 | My answer about Unit 04 | 등록일 | 2015-06-16 |
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내용 | The last article I read in the newspaper was about mers I read this morning. Mers is a middle east respiratory syndrome that is expanded by cough. Mers is hot issue in korea nowadays. Because it have been expanded to all areas and all ages. It was founded that the government’s expectations that the old only have possibility to get this sickness were wrong. Nobody can be safe from mers. The article said people should take a mask and wash their hands as much as they can. So nowadays it is so hard to get hold of a mask. I hope we can find a solution as soon as possible and nobody pass away anymore. | ||
담당강사 | Wynston1 | 등록일 | 2015-06-16 |
첨삭 내용 | The last article I read in the newspaper was about mers I read this morning. Mers is a middle east respiratory syndrome that is expanded by cough. Mers is hot issue in korea nowadays. Because it have been expanded to all areas and all ages. It was founded that the government’s expectations that the old only have possibility to get this sickness were wrong. Nobody can be safe from mers. The article said people should take a mask and wash their hands as much as they can. So nowadays it is so hard to get hold of a mask. I hope we can find a solution as soon as possible and nobody pass away anymore. Thanks for this news, Gloria -- very interesting -- I'll review it for correction tomorrow or the day after :) |