i have a puppy named Kippum. it means joy in Korean. because we got joy after we met him. he is a 1-years-old Maltese. his length of fillet weld is very longer than other Maltese. so his appearnce is always remarkably, when he get in the many dogs. Whenever I pat her forehead, he fall asleep with his head on my leg. todays, he got a our family name. now his name is Kippum Kim. it can proof that we are family.

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i have a puppy named Kippum. it means joy in Korean. because we got joy after we met him. he is a 1-years-old Maltese.

--> I have a puppy named Kippum, and it means joy in Korean language, because we felt joy after we met him. He is a 1 year old Maltese.

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 his length of fillet weld is very longer than other Maltese. so his appearnce is always remarkably, when he get in the many dogs.

-->His length is very long compare to other Maltese, so his appearance is always evident when he is with other dogs.

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Whenever I pat her forehead, he fall asleep with his head on my leg. todays, he got a our family name. now his name is Kippum Kim. it can proof that we are family.

--> Whenever I touch his forehead, he fall asleep with his head on my legs. He also get our family name, now he is Kippum Kim and it is a proof that he is part of our family.