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제목 | Trip to seaside | 등록일 | 2015-06-11 |
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내용 | I went to seaside with my wife from last Friday night to Saturday afternoon. Boosan is very nice place to enjoy the active energy from young generation, I mean youth. Boosan has a lot of tourist attractions, I select Gwang-an beach because I have a good memory on the beach. I made a reservation at private house rental, and lodged at there. In front of the beach, beaufiful suspension bridge is transporting vehicles what has double deck, I mean upper lane and lower lane. Through the night, we took a nice picture with the bridge in the background. My wife like to take a picture in the nature, especially about flower. But she also enjoy take a picture of my family. As you know, me and my wife are long-distance couple so we have to have a good time by journey. By the way, what is difference with trip and journey? and travel? |
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담당강사 | Wynston1 | 등록일 | 2015-06-12 |
첨삭 내용 | I went to THE seaside with my wife from last Friday night THROUGH Saturday afternoon. Boosan is A very nice place to enjoy AND BE active!
WELL WRITTEN HERO YOUR IDEAS WERE VERY CLEAR, AND ALL I DID WAS RESTRUCTURE SENTENCES FOR CORRECT GRAMMAR. I ALSO CORRECTED SOME SPELLING. WE'LL DISCUSS THIS SUBMISSION AT OUR NEXT SESSION ... HAVE A GREAT WEEKEND :) |