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| 제목 | 1st writing | 등록일 | 2015-06-04 |
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| 내용 | Hey my buddy I arrived at a department just now. Luckly, I had a seat in a subway on my way to work. A subway is well installed at Korea. But it changed to the dense subway called hall subway during the office-going hour. So whenever foreigners take a subway during the office-going hour , they got shock. So It really the good luck to sit on the subway seat and go to work. |
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| 담당강사 | Henry1 | 등록일 | 2015-06-05 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Hey my buddy I arrived at a department just now. Luckly, I had a seat in a subway on my way to work. A subway is well installed at Korea. But it changed to the dense subway called hall subway during the office-going hour. =======================================================================================================
Hey buddy! I arrived at a department (Are you talking about "Subway station?" "Department store?" or "Department in your office?") just now.
Hey buddy! I just arrived in the office.
Luckily, I got a seat in the subway when I was on my way to work.
A subway is well installed in Korea.
But it change to the dense subway called hall subway during the rush hour.
Whenever foreigners take a subway during rush hour, they are shock.
So it is better to have a seat when you use the subway.
NOTE:
Red - capitalization, singularity-plurality of nouns and punctuations, wrong spelling
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Happy Friday David!
I noticed that some of your sentences here are quite difficult to understand. Just try to elaborate more your thoughts so I will not misunderstand you. Continue enhancing your English vocabulary. Just always remember to make your sentences easier as possible. Practice more in making simple sentences. Anyway, thank you for your time and have a great weekend! - Henry (^-^)v
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