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제목 A big fire 등록일 2015-05-26
내용 Title : A big fire

There's a another story on the last weekend.
It was the time I went to my new house from my mother's house.
I am not live in my new house yet.
When I drove my car on the way to my new house, I saw a big smoke flow up to the sky from a distance.
I was curious about where it was started as I was close to the site.
And I found that It was started from a big warehouse for clothes.
The site was accross the canal between my new house.
The company of the warehouse was the fashion company of the affiliate of Samsung group.
I searched a news from my mobile phone, and I found that It was started at 2 o'clock at night.
Even though the time I saw fire was around at noon, I was not put out yet.
The warehouse, size up to 9 times of football ground, was burned to ashes.
This was aired all over the country. And it was assumed as arson.
담당강사 Joselin1 등록일 2015-05-27
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Title : A big fire There's a another story on the last weekend. It was the time I went to my new house from my mother's house. I am not live in my new house yet. When I drove my car on the way to my new house, I saw a big smoke flow up to the sky from a distance. I was curious about where it was started as I was close to the site. And I found that It was started from a big warehouse for clothes. The site was accross the canal between my new house. The company of the warehouse was the fashion company of the affiliate of Samsung group. I searched a news from my mobile phone, and I found that It was started at 2 o'clock at night. Even though the time I saw fire was around at noon, I was not put out yet. The warehouse, size up to 9 times of football ground, was burned to ashes. This was aired all over the country. And it was assumed as arson.

I have another story about this past weekend. It happened as I was commuting from my mother's house to my new house, which I am not living in yet. As I was driving my car, I saw a huge cloud of smoke in the distance. I was curious as to where it was happening as I was very close to it. I then found out it had started in a huge clothing warehouse accross the canal from my house. The warehouse was actually owned by Samsung Group - a part of their fashion division affiliate. I searched for the news story on my cell phone and found out it had started at 2 o'clock in the morning. It was now noon and the fire was still going strong. However, the warehouse, which was nine times the size of a football field, had burned to the ground. The story is all over the national news and it is suspected to be arson.

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