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제목 | trip park jogging | 등록일 | 2015-05-18 |
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내용 | First, I find the right place to sightseeing. I usually take toiletries, some emergency medicines, cosmetics and a couple of colthes. The most important thing is my smartphone and digital camera. Smartphone is useful to find a direction and search good places. And I love to take pictures of the scenery and capture the moment of my family or friends with digital camera. What I like most about this park is that there are some tandem bicycle which can be rented for 24hours a day. So, I’m able to enjoying date while riding a bicycle with my boyfriend. There are many items I usually take with me when going on a trip. They depends on how long I am going to travel. I usually bring toiletries, sunscreen and a couple of clothes with me to the my destination. I like jogging because it helps me keep healthy and feel good. After had jogging, when I go back home, my feeling is very refreshing. |
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담당강사 | Edna1 | 등록일 | 2015-05-19 |
첨삭 내용 | First, I find the right place PS: Try to focus on just only one subject. |