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제목 trip park jogging 등록일 2015-05-18
내용 First, I find the right place to sightseeing.
I usually take toiletries, some emergency medicines, cosmetics and a couple of colthes. The most important thing is my smartphone and digital camera. Smartphone is useful to find a direction and search good places. And I love to take pictures of the scenery and capture the moment of my family or friends with digital camera.

What I like most about this park is that there are some tandem bicycle which can be rented for 24hours a day. So, I’m able to enjoying date while riding a bicycle with my boyfriend.

There are many items I usually take with me when going on a trip. They depends on how long I am going to travel. I usually bring toiletries, sunscreen and a couple of clothes with me to the my destination.

I like jogging because it helps me keep healthy and feel good.
After had jogging, when I go back home, my feeling is very refreshing.
담당강사 Edna1 등록일 2015-05-19
첨삭 내용

First, I find the right place to for sightseeing. I usually take toiletries, some emergency medicines, cosmetics and a couple of clothes colthes. The most important thing is my smartphone and digital camera. Smartphone is useful to find a direction and search good places. And I love to take pictures of the scenery and capture the moment of my family or friends with digital camera. What I like most about this park is that there are some tandem bicycle which can be rented for 24hours a day. So, I’m able to enjoying a date while riding a bicycle with my boyfriend. There are many items I usually take with me when going on a trip. They depends on how long I am going to travel. I usually bring toiletries, sunscreen and a couple of clothes with me to the my destination. I like jogging because it helps me keep healthy and feel good. After had jogging, when I go back home, my feeling is very refreshing.

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