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| 제목 | Introduce my self | 등록일 | 2014-04-02 |
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| 내용 | My name is Kim Seungjin and I am 38 years old. I originally come from Daegu and I moved to Seoul about 10 years ago after I finished a master’s degree. At master’s degree I studied mobile communication and I have been working for an engineering company on the Suwon. I usually work on design software architecture and programing for new software products. It’s a very interesting job and I’ve learned so much since I joined the company. | ||
| 담당강사 | Nesta | 등록일 | 2014-05-12 |
| 첨삭 내용 | My name is Kim Seungjin and I am 38 years old. -> This sentence is correct. I originally -> I originally came from Daegu and I moved to Seoul about 10 years ago after I finished my master’s degree.
-> As my master’s degree, I studied mobile communication and I have been working for an engineering company in Suwon for some time now. (use of preposition and time expression) I usually work on design software architecture and -> I usually work on design software architecture and program/programming for new software products. It’s a very interesting job and I’ve learned so much since I joined the company. -> No error in this sentence.
You did well in this composition and I appreciate the time that you alloted in writing this. I already put some corrections and I hope they'll be helpful in improving your writing skill. Job well done! ^''^
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