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제목 | introduce myself. | 등록일 | 2015-05-05 |
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내용 | Let me introduce myself. I am a outgoing personality and I am a family-orented nature. also the campany is passionate white collar. I used to hang out with colleagues more than three times of week. when i got a bit bored I to the future more gentle nature of the owners want to be. |
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담당강사 | Anne | 등록일 | 2015-05-06 |
첨삭 내용 | Let me introduce myself. I am a outgoing personality and I am a family-orented nature. -> I am have an outgoing personality and I am a family-oriented person. also the campany is passionate white collar. -> Also, the company is passionate white collar. I used to hang out with colleagues more than three times of week. when i got a bit bored I to the future more gentle nature of the owners want to be. -> When I got a bit bored I to the future more gentle nature of the owners want to be. ( I couldn't understand your thought here. Sorry. Could you please clarify what you are trying to say?) Hi Jeff, Good day! Thank you very much for writing here in our web page. I appreciate your effort in really pusuing your interest to improve yourself. I wrote some corrections above beside your written sentences. I hope it helps you a lot. Have a nice day! ^^, ~Teacher Anne :) |