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제목 Liyann, Nice to meet you!! 등록일 2014-04-02
내용 Liyann,

I am very happy to meet you. Yesterday, we had the first class and took the level test. I hope that this class give me a chance improving English dramatically.

I will take IELTs and I have to get 5.5 points over in that test. I have a plan to study in Australia in near future. Probabally, in this year or early next year. Because of that, I need to improve my English very rapidly.

I wish you and this program can be a big help for me.

Thank you

Peter
담당강사 Llyann 등록일 2014-04-02
첨삭 내용

Yesterday, we had the first class and took the level test.

->Yesterday, we had a level test.

I hope that this class give me a chance improving English dramatically.
->I hope that this class will help me improve my English skills.

 Probabally, in this year or early next year.

->Probably, this year or early next year.

Because of that, I need to improve my English very rapidly.

->Because of that, I need to improve my English skills rapidly.

 

Hi Peter,

Thanks for writing. Your writing skill is very impressive. And you were also impressive in our class yesterday. Don't worry, I'm here to help you improve your English skills. But of course, you must spend more time in learning the language.

Llyann

 

 

 

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