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제목 | Pollen & air pollution | 등록일 | 2015-04-29 |
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내용 | Spring is very beautiful season because I can enjoy warm sunshine and various kind of flower around near mountian. Several years ago, my wife had been take a picture of wild flowers. (natural flower? There are two kinds of flower, one is planting in plastic house with temperature control, the other is growing up in the nature.) But some people get a serious trouble with pollen alergy, and most Korrean has a big trouble with micro dust from China and fume from car. Due to these dust, thick smog is made in Spring so that we cannot see a beautiful sky line made by mountain. |
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담당강사 | Wynston1 | 등록일 | 2015-04-30 |
첨삭 내용 | Spring is A very beautiful season because I can enjoy warm THE sunshine and various kindS of flowerS HERO ... WE'LL DISCUSS THIS DURING CLASS ... :) |