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제목 | Diary | 등록일 | 2015-04-14 |
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내용 | Last Saturday I have been the weenkend farm in Geoje. Geoje city hall lent farm to the citizen for free. My wife got a land to grow vegetables. so I had to till the ground and sow seeds with my wife's mother. At first, Tilling the soil is interesting. But not much later, my back and finger began aching. I regreted to come to the farm. If my wife ask me to go to the weekend farm. I should not go there. |
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담당강사 | Liz2 | 등록일 | 2015-04-15 |
첨삭 내용 | Last Saturday I have been the weenkend farm in Geoje. ⇒ Last Saturday, I went to a farm in Geoje. (you cannot use have been because theere is a specific time reference which is Last Saturday) Geoje city hall lent farm to the citizen for free. ⇒ Geoje City hall [or Geoje local government] lends farmlands to the citizens for free. My wife got a land to grow vegetables. ⇒ correct sentence so I had to till the ground and sow seeds with my wife's mother. ⇒ That's why, I had to till the ground and sow seeds with my wife's mother. At first, Tilling the soil is interesting. ⇒ At first, Tilling the soil was interesting. But not much later, my back and finger began aching. ⇒ But not much later because my back and finger began aching. I regreted to come to the farm. ⇒ I regreted going to the farm. If my wife ask me to go to the weekend farm. ⇒ If my wife ask me to go the farm next weekend, I should not go there. ⇒ I will refuse.
Hi Mr. Ryang Daehun! I'm happy to have shared some corrections to you. Please study the sentences well. Thank you. ♥ Teacher Liz ♥ |