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제목 Please correct the mistakes if there are any ^^ 등록일 2015-04-07
내용 < Self-Introduction >
Hi, my name is jun hee Lee and I am 26 years old.
I am working at a construction and service company which is located in Yangjae in Seoul Korea and I’ve been working at this company for 6 months. I’m an air conditioning engineer.
I live in Seoul with my friend, and I have lived here almost one year. but I was born in Busan which is located in the south of korea.
I’m a considerate and optimistic, so everyone around me wants to pour out their troubles to me.
Whenever they come to me pour out their trouble, I’m willing to listen to them.
My hobby is listening music and singing a song. Because music makes me happy so much. Whenever I take the bus or subway, I like to relax with the music.
At last, I love studying English, so I hope OPIC test could be good chance to study English for me and would be more self-motivated than before.
Thank you for listening to my introduction.
담당강사 Kris2 등록일 2015-04-08
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< Self-Introduction > Hi, my name is jun hee Lee and I am 26 years old. I am working at a construction and service company which is located in Yangjae in Seoul Korea and I’ve been working at this company for 6 months. I’m an air conditioning engineer. I live in Seoul with my friend, and I have lived here for almost one year. but I was born in Busan which is located in the southern part of Korea. I’m a considerate and optimistic, so everyone around me wants to pour out their troubles to me. Whenever they come to me pour out their troubles, I’m always willing to listen to them. My hobby is listening to music and singing a song. Because music makes me I . Whenever I take the bus or subway, I like to always relax with the music. At last, I love studying English, so I hope OPIC test could would be a  good chance for me to study English  . I would be more self-motivated than before. Thank you for listening to my introduction.

 

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