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제목 Today's story 등록일 2015-03-25
내용 Dear Sir

First of all, I'm sorry about miss your call in today's morning.
In truth yesterday I had a dinner event for celebration about Promoted staff
so, I drunk some beer and I came back home too late
so, I missed your call

I usually go to work and had no difference.
but afternoon I went to doctor because The cold is not better for a long time
I asked the doctor about the medicine is effectual for me?
Doctor said to me it is good to change them.
so I got some new medicine for 5 days.
Now I hope it will be better until this weekend.

See you soon

Yours sincerely Luise
담당강사 Wynston1 등록일 2015-03-27
첨삭 내용

Dear Sir First of all, I'm sorry about miss your call in today's morning. In truth yesterday I had a dinner event for celebration about Promoted staff so, I drunk some beer and I came back home too late so, I missed your call I usually go to work and had no difference. but afternoon I went to doctor because The cold is not better for a long time I asked the doctor about the medicine is effectual for me? Doctor said to me it is good to change them. so I got some new medicine for 5 days. Now I hope it will be better until this weekend. See you soon Yours sincerely Luise

 

No problem Louis ...

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